Who wants to read a WIP Deus Ex book?

[shadowblade34]

I started to write a Deus Ex book a long time ago, and not so recently I uploaded it to a Wordpress blog that I had made.

This is currently a very old version of it, I have curently written up to the part where JC is on his way back to the UNATCO HQ after interrogating Leo Gold.

Here's the link if you want to take a look. CLICK HERE FOR AWESOMENESS

And if you want to look around the rest of my site, go do it.

[Duke Floss]

that link didn't work for me - but I found it, http://yusufchaudhary.wordpress.com/

I'll give it a read when I have some spare time

[JC_Helios]

I like metroid13's old deus ex "book", hopefully yours will be good too

[shadowblade34]

Thanks for telling me about that bobby, it's fixed now.
@JC|Helios I hope it you do like it, Prentice Gede from Game Central did. Also, I have a problem with Metroid13's fan fic, some things like the fact the the two men talking at the begining shouldn't be mentioned, and Maggie Chow was walking into Versalife, not out of it. Also, the emotion that JC conveys in his book, I show that he cannot convey such emotion, even if he means it. But all in all, it was good, and is going to be similar to mine.

Only differemce is that I actually want to finish mine with the whole book

[shadowblade34]

Bump becuase I'm gonna add an updated part of it tomorrow.

EDIT: Has anyone found the time to read it?
Do any of you like it?